http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/ Dancing Around the World! Fri, 10 Jul 2009 03:07:54 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/comment-page-1/#comment-54 Happenings » Blog Archive » Blogging in the Future? Tue, 06 May 2008 03:19:22 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/#comment-54 [...] you have completed during Writer’s Workshop.  For example, Belle wrote her story “My Big Jump” at the beginning of the year.  After you post a blog, your classmates, friends, teachers, [...] [...] you have completed during Writer’s Workshop.  For example, Belle wrote her story “My Big Jump” at the beginning of the year.  After you post a blog, your classmates, friends, teachers, [...]

]]> http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/comment-page-1/#comment-49 christians Fri, 18 Apr 2008 19:26:57 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/#comment-49 I love your voice in your piece. This piece rules I love your voice in your piece. This piece rules

]]> http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/comment-page-1/#comment-36 cassieh Wed, 27 Feb 2008 19:35:38 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/#comment-36 Belle I loved your writing. Because you put your personality into it. Belle I loved your writing. Because you put your personality into it.

]]> http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/comment-page-1/#comment-33 Belle Wed, 27 Feb 2008 17:18:35 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/#comment-33 Sarah, It was a water slide but I jumped so high when i landed at the bottom of the slide I knocked the air out of me. Sarah, It was a water slide but I jumped so high when i landed at the bottom of the slide I knocked the air out of me.

]]> http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/comment-page-1/#comment-31 isaac Wed, 27 Feb 2008 17:11:57 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/#comment-31 "hey i liked how you explained that your mom is [pregnant] and [i mean everyone.]'you were really focused on one thing which was your big jump.'you should improve explaining more details.i like your onomatopoeia. “hey i liked how you explained that your mom is [pregnant] and [i mean everyone.]‘you were really focused on one thing which was your big jump.’you should improve explaining more details.i like your onomatopoeia.

]]> http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/comment-page-1/#comment-30 sarah Wed, 27 Feb 2008 17:04:53 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/#comment-30 Belle I loved the part when you put splat! yeow! But were did you fall on the slide or beside it?And was it one of those biow up slides or a hard slide? Belle I loved the part when you put splat! yeow! But were did you fall on the slide or beside it?And was it one of those biow up slides or a hard slide?

]]> http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/comment-page-1/#comment-29 shulburt Sat, 23 Feb 2008 10:15:41 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/bellerinaspage/2008/02/21/my-big-jump/#comment-29 I LOVE this story! You wrote this at the beginning of the year though-so I am wondering with all that you have learned about writing this year, what would you change if you had the chance to revise it? I LOVE this story! You wrote this at the beginning of the year though-so I am wondering with all that you have learned about writing this year, what would you change if you had the chance to revise it?

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