posted by brandonl on Oct 8
Once there was a locksmith named Harold. Harold worked at a school. He was a good locksmith. But one day he had a bad day because he got a fortune cookie from a chinese restaurant. Harold’s fortune said your life will forever be cursed. Harold was so sad he was in bed all day. So when the next morning came he had such a good dream he forgot all about that stupid fortune. But when he went to work that day everything was horrible. He also lost his job because he disobeyed his boss the principal. So he went back to the chinese restaurant got another fortune cookie and this time his fortune said the curse is broken for now. He was so happy he left a 100 dollar tip for the restaurant. Harold jumped and said HOORAY! all the way out the door. From that day forward he had the best life ever.THE END!
January 15th, 2010 at 2:28 pm
I like that you wrote about a locksmith thats a really good story i really liked it.
January 20th, 2010 at 12:47 pm
I liked when he was disobeyed the principal.I think u should use more onomonopeia when he disobeyed the principal.
January 20th, 2010 at 12:56 pm
Thanks for commenting on my blog Christian and thanks for saying I wrote a good story.
brandonl