I like the way you properly used such extended vocabulary. Keep in mind, always double check your spelling and your capitalization. It is sometimes easier to read it backwards in order to catch a spelling mistake or a punctuation mistake. We all make them. Our brain knows what we want to say so when we read it, we skim over the mistakes and only absorb the meaning.

I also want to emphasize on confidence. When you write a paper, whatever it is about, be confident. When you end the story with, “I guess this is the end….” it leaves the reader wondering if there was more to it. Always be firm! This is YOUR paper, YOUR story, and it is written by YOU! It doesn’t matter if you are summarizing someone’ work, it is your take on it. Tell it how YOU want to tell it. If they don’t like it oh well! You have such a strong vocabulary, don’t second guess yourself! Be bold and be confident and you will be unstoppable!