posted by emilym on Feb 17
Ding, Dong, “Delivory! “I’ll get it!”I have a delivory for Venesssa Ramirez .”O.K.” I said as the mail man handed me a package the size of a brick. as I opend the package , it started to wigle and I heard burbles.I jumped back with my mouth wide open and my eyes were large ,I felt like I wanted to yell,but I just stood there. I put my hand into the box and somthing bit me,”Oww! Somthing bit me! I yelled. I tried one more time and stuck my hand into the box and pulled out a turtle! I looked at the creature in amasment. After a moment of silence I said,”I’m going to name you TinyTim!”He smelled like durty water.He is green and he has a big smile on his face,” Do you want to go play at the park TinyTim? Burble. I’ll tack that as a yes.”As TinyTim slid down the slide,things were whirling in my head like ,”Will TinyTim like me ?” Will he run away? Will he get lost in my house?” After a while me and TinyTim were on the swings. I felt excited to have a turtle and TinyTim felt happy too. Finally we went home, but when we walked in the door my mom wasnt happy. “Are you O.K. mom?” She did not answer. Finally, she said ” This turtle was your Christmas present!” Oops.” ” Sorry mom, but on the bright side I liked it.” I will never forget the time I went to the park with TinyTim and I will never open a package without my moms primishen. I felt sad because the day had to end.