Comments on: Follow My Eater

By: jesser

jesser — Mon, 05 May 2008 20:37:31 +0000

Abel your story is so funny that couldn’t stop laughing your
dog ate your book.

By: abelj

abelj — Tue, 15 Apr 2008 19:26:27 +0000

I think I will add some authors tools and some humor to it next time. Thanks for the information!

By: Mrs. Hulburt

Mrs. Hulburt — Sun, 18 Nov 2007 21:47:14 +0000

I remember when this happened-you were so worried that I was going to be mad at you! I think it would be neat if you could add in a description of the book-the fact that this book was about a dog-and there was a dog on the front cover just added more humor to the situation (although I know you didn’t think so at the time!)

By: Dean Mattson

Dean Mattson — Sun, 18 Nov 2007 19:49:19 +0000

What a great idea for a story! I thought it was especially clever the way you built it around that “Now instead of Follow My Leader, it was follow my eater” line. You paced the story well and your use of dialogue was very strong. Good writing!