Carlsbad Caverns
This field trip was the best experience I have ever had with my class! Guess where we went as a class… Carlsbad caverns! What the cool thing was, was that I would be having a new experience, because I have never been to the caverns. Okay, enough small talk and let’s get to the story. “Wow, that looks scary,” I whispered to Frankie. “I know,” he responded to me. As soon as down the natural entrance we took a picture of the whole class down in the caves. There was millions maybe even more than that! In my group was: Frankie, Isaac, Josh, and I in ms. torres’ group. We were touring the big room and guess what… my camera died on me! and I was about to take a picture of the Witch’s Finger, but at least I got a picture of the Lion’s Tail. As soon as we got to the Bottomless Pit, that’s when I got scared! It seamed like the pit never ended and I have a great fear of heights. As we got to the end of the caverns we finally got to sit down. This was the best experience I’ve ever had with my friends and I recommend you go there!
criss on 10 Oct 2008 at 9:57 am #
This was a great piece Abel, but I believe you could expand your story and put strong that capture your reader.
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