Comments for Happy and Sad Times

Comment on Bootcamp-Like Basketball by seth

seth — Tue, 25 Aug 2009 22:03:06 +0000

I liked how you recorded your voice and it was a masterpiece story.

Comment on San Diego Sea World by patttm

patttm — Sun, 19 Oct 2008 10:05:55 +0000

That sounds like it was fun.I hope one day I can go there.
Any way I wonder what the seagulls said when you scared them away.

Comment on Horror Pool by Dean Mattson

Dean Mattson — Sun, 19 Oct 2008 01:59:20 +0000

That’s certainly a scary situation, and you set up the situation well. But there’s a missing section to your story between the “Help! Help! I’m drowning!” and the “Thank God!” How was Dillon saved? Did someone jump in? Or did he figure out something on his own?

Comment on My First Double Digit Birthday by Gramma

Gramma — Thu, 16 Oct 2008 21:34:34 +0000

Abel, I was reading your blog on your double digit birthday and I was remembering the first time I laid eyes on you. It was one of the most beautiful experiences of my life. You lived with me until you were 8 years old and they were very memorable years. I was really sad when you moved out into your new home, but when I see how happy you and your mom and dad are it makes me really happy. Love Gramma

Comment on Carlsbad Caverns by criss

criss — Fri, 10 Oct 2008 14:57:51 +0000

This was a great piece Abel, but I believe you could expand your story and put strong that capture your reader.

Comment on My 4th Grade Year by Mrs. Hulburt

Mrs. Hulburt — Fri, 12 Sep 2008 05:02:52 +0000

I was thinking about this the other day, and why you don’t like math. I wonder if it may have something to do with the fact that in math, there isn’t much room for creativity and individuality. We both know how you like to be an individual and oh so creative! Do you think that might have something to do with it?

Comment on The Spiky Things and the Big Bumps Inside Carlsbad Caverns by pattym

pattym — Mon, 08 Sep 2008 15:11:33 +0000

I hope you had a good time at Carlsbad Caverns.
Last year i was learning that stalagmites is for ground because of the g,
stalacmites is for ceiling because of the c.

Comment on The Spiky Things and the Big Bumps Inside Carlsbad Caverns by isaacc

isaacc — Fri, 23 May 2008 20:26:57 +0000

Next time you can explain the kind of formations.the rest of the story was really great.

Comment on Bootcamp-Like Basketball by joshs

joshs — Fri, 23 May 2008 20:17:41 +0000

I agree with Mr mattson because it’s a masterpiece. We have practice like that.

Comment on Bootcamp-Like Basketball by frankiet

frankiet — Fri, 23 May 2008 19:45:37 +0000

Abel I couldn’t agree with you more the first day of practice was so HARD I couldn’t belive if we missed a layup we had to run, although now that we gone to practice more it’s gotten easier and easier don’t you think?