Carlsbad Caverns
Guess what I heard? Weell… 4th grade is going to Carlsbad Caverns! There we will see all sorts of whatchamacallits and doohickeys. Let me tell you what some of those doohickeys will be and what time well be leaving and such.
Fourth grade will be leaving at approximately 8:30 and arrive at 12:30 or so then one small group of 4th graders will tour the caverns. We will there see stalagmites and stalactites. Then when we are done touring the caverns, we will drive to a small town called Carlsbad. We will have dinner and then drive back to the caverns and view the bat flight where we will see about 2000 bats flying. After the bat flight we will drive back and go home.
I really liked how you said, whatchamacallits and doohickeys but what I think you should improve is to describe how the stalagmites and stalactites were made. What time do the bats come out?
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