Comments on: A New Adventure

By: Johanna

Johanna — Fri, 18 Jul 2008 18:47:36 +0000

Wow I think That it would be completely amazing to go to yellow stone!!

By: Abelj

Abelj — Tue, 13 May 2008 14:51:20 +0000

This entry is really exciting and you always tell the class how much you love Mammoth lakes, but what I really think you could add in there is how Carrie and Christopher felt about it.

By: alexr

alexr — Tue, 13 May 2008 14:36:20 +0000

I love the way you put ” around helping it was HILARIOUS. I cant pinpoint anything wrong right off the bat overall good blog.

By: Austin

Austin — Wed, 07 May 2008 15:38:42 +0000

I’ve never been to Mammoth lakes.I have been to Californua

By: jesser

jesser — Wed, 07 May 2008 15:32:45 +0000

Mrs.Hulburt What made you so tired?And witch lakes did you see at the woods?And I also like your entry.Who is Mammoth?

By: belleg

belleg — Mon, 05 May 2008 20:23:29 +0000

Mrs.Hulburt,I agree with Stephanie but thats the only idea I have for you!! I think you should add a little more description because I’ve never been to Yellowstone or Mammoth lakes!

By: Criss

Criss — Mon, 05 May 2008 20:06:38 +0000

I really like this story because of the beginning and because you put voice like when you said “I love my class, I love what I do, but I’m tired. But I think you should add to this story why you like Mammoth Lakes so much

By: stephanief

stephanief — Mon, 05 May 2008 20:03:09 +0000

Hey Mrs.Hulburt, I loved your entry I think it was very exiting! But what I think you should improve is to explain a little more about Mammoth Lakes so the people that haven’t been there can visualize it more. I think your piece will be more powerful if you do this. =}