Comments on: Shamu http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/ It's just the way life goes. Thu, 20 Nov 2008 13:25:14 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: marthaa http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-348 marthaa Sat, 27 Sep 2008 22:56:03 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-348 Wow! I saw lots of exitement in your pase I also saw shamoo he is gigantic! well anyways I like your pase butI think ou need a little more flashy vocab but it was so powerful! Wow! I saw lots of exitement in your pase I also saw shamoo he is gigantic! well anyways I like your pase butI think ou need a little more flashy vocab but it was so powerful!

]]> By: justin http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-347 justin Fri, 26 Sep 2008 21:18:08 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-347 Mrs.Hulbert I have been to sea world before and I new were you were because I heard of shamu and the killer whale is in sea world And I went to other place in sea world they are all cool and I just want to say hi to you and thank you for buting stuff up on my blogs. Mrs.Hulbert I have been to sea world before and I new were you were because I heard of shamu and the killer whale is in sea world And I went to other place in sea world they are all cool and I just want to say hi to you and thank you for buting stuff up on my blogs.

]]> By: alejandrap http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-325 alejandrap Wed, 17 Sep 2008 16:20:15 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-325 How cool I have never been to sea world thats a lucky thing!!!!!!! Alejandra Ponce :) :) How cool I have never been to sea world thats a lucky thing!!!!!!!

Alejandra Ponce :) :)

]]> By: johannaa http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-247 johannaa Tue, 26 Aug 2008 00:23:22 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-247 Mrs.Hulburt, I love being in your class! I think that it is verry fun! (Although today was my first day) I think that my mom and I know that you will be an exelent teacher this year! My mom also likes how you siymbalized the eraser, that everyone makes mistakes. Like I said, you will be an exelant teacher! Johanna :) Mrs.Hulburt, I love being in your class! I think that it is verry fun! (Although today was my first day) I think that my mom and I know that you will be an exelent teacher this year! My mom also likes how you siymbalized the eraser, that everyone makes mistakes. Like I said, you will be an exelant teacher!

Johanna :)

]]> By: johanna http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-238 johanna Sat, 23 Aug 2008 23:51:09 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-238 Hello, again! I just figured out yesterday that I am going to be in your class. I am EXTREMELY exited about the first day of school!!! I remember that in the second grade, I was so exited about school starting that I woke up in the middle of the night!! I think that its only because my mommy is a teacher. I am really sad about the playground burning down. :( Sincerely, Johanna Hello, again! I just figured out yesterday that I am going to be in your class. I am EXTREMELY exited about the first day of school!!! I remember that in the second grade, I was so exited about school starting that I woke up in the middle of the night!! I think that its only because my mommy is a teacher. I am really sad about the playground burning down. :(
Sincerely, Johanna

]]> By: Mrs. Hulburt http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-218 Mrs. Hulburt Mon, 21 Jul 2008 01:04:18 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-218 Hi Johanna! Thanks for reading and responding to this piece. I reread it for the first time in quite a while when I saw your comment and as a result, I feel that there are some revisions I need to make to improve it. I may have to post another entry with my revisions. I was really excited to see that you had started a blog. I hope you are enjoying it-it’s a great way to share your writing with the world. As for 4th grade…I don’t know if you’ll be in my class or not yet. We won’t have the class lists until August…so we will both just have to wait and see! Hi Johanna! Thanks for reading and responding to this piece. I reread it for the first time in quite a while when I saw your comment and as a result, I feel that there are some revisions I need to make to improve it. I may have to post another entry with my revisions.

I was really excited to see that you had started a blog. I hope you are enjoying it-it’s a great way to share your writing with the world. As for 4th grade…I don’t know if you’ll be in my class or not yet. We won’t have the class lists until August…so we will both just have to wait and see!

]]> By: Johanna A. http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-214 Johanna A. Mon, 14 Jul 2008 19:42:15 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-214 Hi Mrs.Hulburt! I loved that story! I liked all of the detail you put in to it. I think that you will be a great fourth grade teacher next year! And I hope that your class next year is well-behaved! Johanna A. P.S. you messaged me on my blog and I was sort of wondering if you were going to be my teacher next year. Hi Mrs.Hulburt!
I loved that story! I liked all of the detail you put in to it. I think that you will be a great fourth grade teacher next year! And I hope that your class next year is well-behaved!
Johanna A.

P.S. you messaged me on my blog and I was sort of wondering if you were going to be my teacher next year.

]]> By: Naomid http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-195 Naomid Tue, 13 May 2008 14:45:41 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-195 Mrs. Hulburt,the part I liked about this was the first sentence in the piece. I think it can be improved by extending it by using show me don't tell me. :) But I will give you a high 3! Mrs. Hulburt,the part I liked about this was the first sentence in the piece. I think it can be improved by extending it by using show me don’t tell me. :)

But I will give you a high 3!

]]> By: abril http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-190 abril Tue, 13 May 2008 14:41:45 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-190 I like all the authors tool you used and I got a picture inside my head I think you can add more detail into this story. I like all the authors tool you used and I got a picture inside my head I think you can add more detail into this story.

]]> By: Christians http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-184 Christians Tue, 13 May 2008 14:35:47 +0000 http://wordpress.edgemereroadrunners.com/shulburt/2008/05/07/shamu/#comment-184 I really liked the strong vocab. I agree with Stephanie though. Also try to discribe how you felt when you left. :) I really liked the strong vocab. I agree with Stephanie though. Also try to discribe how you felt when you left. :)

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