Comments on: Let Sleeping Dogs Lie

By: saraim

saraim — Tue, 27 Jan 2009 03:06:52 +0000

On my first reply to this I really was not thinking about it.I think you need to get timber a bed or something because if he was my dog I would buy him a bed.You could have your husband come home from work and you could have a good night sleep.

By: idalysd

idalysd — Fri, 05 Dec 2008 20:58:31 +0000

I liked the part when timber was on the bed and was saying do you mind I am trying to sleep here because that what my dogs douse

By: idalysd

idalysd — Fri, 14 Nov 2008 16:33:08 +0000

I like your story because of how you talk about timber and how you tell us what it sounded like when he talk to Mr. hulburt in do you mind Im trying to sleep here voice.

By: alysandrac

alysandrac — Tue, 11 Nov 2008 14:50:17 +0000

I like how you that you said that Timber said ”do you mind I’m trying to sleep here.” And how Timber glare into your husband’s eyes. You need more flashy vocab.

By: justinm

justinm — Thu, 06 Nov 2008 12:48:54 +0000

Mrs.Hulbert I like your personafication too when timber said do you mind. and I like the rethorical quesstoin at the end. you need to add more flashy vocab.

By: saraim

saraim — Tue, 04 Nov 2008 02:06:34 +0000

I really liked when you said in your story do you mind I am trying to sleep here.
And I think you need more flashy vocab.

By: pattym

pattym — Mon, 03 Nov 2008 03:26:31 +0000

I liked the personafication that you used to say Timber was like the king of the castle.
I liked your rethorical question at the end and the begginning.
You do need more flashy vocab.
What happened after Timber went back to sleep after he said do you mind?
What did Mr. Hulburt say about Timber when he did’nt move?