It was a dreadful day. I had a runny nose, my head ached, and I was late for school. But I had a weather machine waiting for me under my bed.

When I got home from school I raced to my room. But little did I know my brother knew about weather machine and that he wanted revenge for what I did to him in my last story.

I ran into my room and checked for the weather machine. But I couldn’t find it. “Where did I leave it?” I said to myself. Then all of the sudden I saw my brother racing across the hall with a grin on his face. “Hey Cris, looking for this?” my brother said waving the weather machine. “Hey, give me that back!” I yelled at my brother. “You’ll have to take it from me,” my brother said to me while running away.

I quickly fired after him. But I didn’t know where he was. So I thought he was outside. But little did I know I made a big mistake. So I opened the door to outside and raced outside. Then my brother shut the door and locked it. It ended up he hid somewhere inside the house.

Then I saw a mischievous smile on my brother’s face. Then I saw his finger going to press the button snow/blizzard. “No, you wouldn’t dare,” I said. “Oh yeah, watch me,” he said back. Then he pressed the button. There was a blinding light like staring at the sun. then a blizzard started.”C.Co..Col…COLD!” I hollered. I ran to the backyard and opened the back door. I was furious and very cold. I saw my brother standing next to his room I bolted toward him.Then I grabbed the weather machine. My brother got revenge, but I’m going to be the one to get revenge next. What should I do to him?

1. isaacc Says:
   April 10th, 2008 at 9:53 am

   You were really focused on one event which was the weather machine. I also was interested in like how you said you won’t dare oh yeah watch me, because it reminds me of me and my brother because we always fight with each other.

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