I just spent the better part of the evening reading and commenting on my students’ blogs. Wow! That’s all I can say…wow! The growth, the desire to write and publish, and the enthusiasm I am reading kindles the fire in me to want to read more, to see what stories these budding young authors will come up with next. They are truly putting their “best word forward.” When I read lines like:
- Can you imagine not being able to sleep good for two months waiting to hear if you passed?
- I kept looking at the clock to see if it was morning so I could open my presents. It’s not! I thought. I still have to wait five more hours. 1:00, 2:00, 3:00, 4:00.
- That’s why my little crystal eyes felt puffy like I’m going to cry. I felt a little clear tear roll down my face. “Don’t cry, Breeana Nicole Ruelas.” I thought.
- I was so excited that my eyes were stretching like a rubber band looking for my gift.
- 1….2….3…. good-bye world,” I said to myself. And everything about it. “Well let’s… gulp!… do this. aaaaaahhhhhhhhh!”
- My favorite place to go to is a secret , just guess for a second . . .
- One day I was so warm in my bed covers. ” Boom”! my brother and my mom said “It’s snowing!”
- She was making a picture that I can understand. “Oh, I get it,” I thought to myself.
- I was soooo excited, my bones felt like popping out of my body.
- Rebbecca was so surprised she started to jump up and down like a kangaroo!
- I looked all the way down. Wam! We all went down, dashing like a roadrunner.
- G-R-R-R!!!! Ah-h-h-h!!! Some dog was chasing me!! I ran, ran, and ran as if I were a cheetah!
- The soft one was light green and orange. I wonder why they were different colors?
I begin to realize that these young writers are really starting to enjoy putting their stories on paper for others to read. Each of them shares in their own unique way, their own special story. Each one breathes life into their words. I feel their excitement, their wonder, their fear and their joy in every piece I read. And I tell myself, “Ginny, all their hard work, the planning, drafting, revising, rewriting and editing is beginning to pay off. They are feeling successful, and the more successful they feel, the more they want to write. Now, I just need about 20 computer stations in my room…but that’s another story!

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