Similes, Metaphors, and Personification

• November
• 19

When we enter Mrs. Baker’s class we are as crazy as monkeys about to fed. Mrs. Baker tells the class to be quiet about every 10 minutes, but we are as loud as Howler monkeys. When we start doing our work usually kids that won’t pay attention and get up out of their seats and mess around and it really irritates Mrs. Baker. The trouble makers are, well I’m not going to name them. Usually, Mrs. Baker is up and down with them she is as red as a tomato when they are messing around. If we had a bear in our class, it would be the best student in there. Mrs. Baker was an explosive ready to blow once we started to talk. When we start our lessons, we are like rockets ready to take off when we talk.

The Talking Nacho

• November
• 11

One day when Fred (talking nacho) was outside the food market enjoying the hot sun, he was about to get up from his tanning bed when out of the blue a hobo comes out of nowhere and tried to eat him. Fred dunked out of the way and escaped but the old man wasn’t ready to give up on Fred. The hobo chased him into a dark ally but it was a dead end.

“Oh no!” said Fred. What should I do? He started to panic, the hobo was getting closer and closer. Finally Fred found a way out - there was a crack in the rock wall on the side of him.

He went through but not all of him made it. His right arm was left behind right after he slithered through the crack. Fred jumped in excitement as he was sprinting down the street.

A few minutes later, he saw a man in a jacket and his hood was over his face. He started getting worried; he was wondering if it was the hobo that tried stealing him before. So Fred started doing a little jog but, as he turned around, he saw the man doing the same thing. So he started going a little faster and faster until he kinda of got the point after the man said ” I’m the hobo that wanted to eat you”, Fred really had no place to go so he thought about giving him self up to the hobo, but then he thought to himself “what about my family and my kids” me decided no he wasn’t going to turn him self into that hobo. Fred ran as fast as he can towards anything that can hide him but so he thought to him self where wouldn’t a hobo look so he ran all down the street called Pop eyes chicken, what a strange name for a street. Finally he was at the Jewelery store, once the hobo saw him go into the store he thought security would kick him out so he decided to wait and wait until he got out it was four o clock in the morning and he was still waiting outside he called it a day and gave up on Fred the talking nacho  but Fred also felt bad about the hobo but something had popped into his head when he was getting out of that crack in the wall his arm had fallen off. So Fred ran all the way back to where his arm fell off and came rushing to where the hobo had lived, in a card board box behind the food market. Once Fred saw the hobo he was about to run but he needed to get this hobo off his chest so he went up to the hobo and said “I’m sorry for not letting you eat me but I will give you my arm it fell off when you tried catching me through that crack in the wall”. The hobo said yes to his arm once Fred gave him this arm the hobo ran off and was so happy that he actually had something to eat unlike the time some high schoolers came up to him and told him that it was an apple that gave to him but it was actually dog poop. So Fred really felt proud about himself and walked all the way home which was really far. Once he walked home his kids and his wife Sharon asked how was your day well nothing out of the ordinary ,just being chased by a hobo into an ally and got chased by him on the streets and went into a jewelry store and left about 2 minutes after, yah it was good day. When his wife went into the kitchen she asked,”What happened to your arm well its a long story I went through this hole and enough said Sharon I think I know what happened to you, and what is that well I can hear whisper when you came in the house and you said”I can’t that hobo toke my arm after going through that crack which had torn off my arm. Oh I see well I actually felt bad for that hobo because about a week ago I saw him on the floor thriving for food so this little gave him a lolli pop. “WOW” said Sharon that man hasn’t ate in long time then. Well I still haven’t told you what happened after my arm fell off…………………… what happened? said the wife. I felt bad for the hobo and I gave him mty arm to eat it,  wow wow wow wow you sacrificed your own arm for a hobo, Yah said Fred. Oh my oh my I can’t even express how I feel right now, you can tell me that I did something that was very nice. Not even you are not off the hook how are you going to do write, I dont have to write I can, I can, I can, I got nothing, just get over it its not your arms and I can do what ever I like with my arms. BURN there son in the back round she told him to go to his can and go to sleep, as he did Fred and Sharon went to bed also. So the next day Fred did his daily routine he went outside to get a tan and when he got outside and saw a big shadow he got up and saw the hobo and the hobo asked can I live with you, 2 reasons why you can’t 1.your to big to fit in our carton 2. Your to big to fit in our carton. Sorry I understand, as the hobo walked away Fred went back to his tan and had pretty much of a good day he watched the sun go down with his wife Sharon and after they got home from the sunset he put up his tanning bed and finally went to bed and thats the story of how the talking nacho got away from the crazy hobo but the hobo learned his lesson by not chasing a talking nacho all around town.

Characteristics

• November
• 11

My friends are different in there own way they can me nice, thoughtful, kind, sweet, but you never know what kind of friends you really have, some can be controlling, mean, push you into things you don’t want to do. My friends treat me very well. The most important thing in a person is their personality or the way they look at life, such being negative or positive and they should also be responsible. I don’t need to re-evaluate my friends there good just the way they are. Quality lets see…………… quality is something that represents you or a word that describes you. Characteristics is a very simple word and it is a very helpful word. I chose the friends I have today because they don’t push me into something I don’t want to do that I might regret.

Presidental Election

• November
• 5

On Monday 11/3/08 we had a debate at school. Well the outcome of the debate didn’t come out so good. Well let me talk about how it went all terribly wrong. First I thought the McCain side was going to win the debate at school but according to crowd about 85% were going for Obama. As we started our power points kids were paying close attention to what we had to say. At the end of the day kids started to vote and eventually The Obama Team won. But it was a good election. And the best man won. Now about the REAL election. I think Obama being president was a good choice. For one is Because he had some what of experience and it would be kinda cool to had the first ever Black President.

Football In The Morning

• October
• 31

One day when me and my brother Joshua were playing football in our backyard, Joshua, a great quarterback, had thrown a bullet towards me and it was going so fast it had gone right threw my hands and into the neighbor’s backyard. Joshua got nervous because they had a huge Pit Bull, I decided to go over but right when I was going to jump over the pit bull jumped over the rock wall. Me and Josh started running all over the backyard and once one of us was near the water hose we turned it on and sprayed the dog until it ran back to its owner’s house.

Recording Our Steps

• October
• 29

1. First I got chosen for the topic Immigration

2. I found out what each Candidate felt about immigration

3. I searched information about the topic

4. I copied all the information into my notebook

5. I put all the information in my own words

6. Put the information on to a Power Point

7. I typed all the information on to certain slides

8. We edited the slides

9. Put all the slides in the correct order

10. Made sure everything was in order

11. The Power Point was finished

PE

• October
• 7

Today at school we were playing soccerball, it was Baker v.s Ward. Once Coach Sanchez blew the whistle we went crazy, everyone started running everywhere. When the ball was high in the air someone got confused and touched the ball with their hands. They had to kick a penalty kick. We all backed off, when David kicked. Nick was goalie. He wasn’t paying attention and David scored. Coach said one minute left, we went in a rush, Carlos had the ball. He was so close making the goal but the game was already over.

The Ride Home

• October
• 2

As me and my friend Nick were going to my house, right beside of us we saw a cop. Me and nick forgot to put on our seat belts and when nick was struggling to put it on. He was choking because all of the seat belt was all around his neck. As we looked to the left, the cop was laughing at us and just drove off. After that me and Nick just started laughing all the way to my house and will always remember the time we got laughed at by a cop for not having our seatbelts on.

Eastwood Football Game

• October
• 2

The day me and my friends Esteban and Nicholas went to a football game at Eastwood High School, LETS GO EASTWOOD LETS GO was all we heard throughout the whole game. Nick got up and left with Esteban to get some popcorn from the snack bar, our older friend named Peanut let us cut in line because the line all the way at the entrance of the football. And going through all of the line it was already the 3rd quarter and the score was 6 to 42. We figured since the Troopers were losing, we decided just to leave and go home.

Edgemere’s Assembly

• October
• 1

Today Edgemere had an assembly. It went really well. Let me take you one step at a time. They called us to go to the Cafeteria. Before that, the principal asked me and my friend Brionna  to hold up a banner during the assembly. We were so excited. Anyways back to the story once we sat down with our class, the principal asked us to sit in the very front. Once they did all the important stuff such as the pinning and recognizing the Board of Trustees, they gave us a drum roll and got the banner and rolled it out dramatically. Everyone was clapping and the principals were behind us and the Board of Trustees. For some reason I was so excited. I’m never excited when on stage but today was really different.